I ask if anyone is there
I receive no answer
Only a vague sense of being
No one is there
I feel a presence
A ghostly whisper of hope
Why must you torment me?
The blackness overwhelms
A tear falls in front of me
Cried by a single eye
Floating in an indigo aura
Of knowledge I have yet to comprehend
I live in the dark
But am blinded by the light
Of a truth unknown of me
Of life outside of the mask
Life is an illusion
That is only perceived by those it has deceived
Until this the world can recognize
I live my obscure understanding
Alone
7 comments:
This poem is SO like you. What's with you and eyes?
Geez. (Jeez?)
Anywho, me likes. But lemme offer you a challenge: write a poem about something nice. One that doesn't make me want to go die in a hole all alone.
Not that I'd do that. I'm too important.
En Garde! *poke* YOU'VE BEEN POKED!
Poke is such a stupid word...poke poke poke poke poke...
Ok bye.
Dying in a hole is not a cool fate (not that i know or remember anything *shifty eyes*) but yeah I'm not sure what to write about... but I'll try ok. Probably nature cause it's so beautiful. And yeah well, this is my way of releasing pent up anger but for you I'll try...I'll post it when I write it k?
GREAT POEM!!!
- it's Kacie!
:D
<333
Ok. I'll look foreward to it...
...I guess. Should I be awaiting for a clumsy melange of pretty words, or deep dark meanings within the lines?
Or a combo of both?
Well, I shall have to wait and see. Meanwhile, I'll stare at your picture. It's quite captivating.
*stares*
I think you can expect something that kinda tells a story in a way... a lyrical poem. As for the deep dark meaning we shall see, only time will tell. And yes I DO have a spiffy picture.
lyrical? So I can dance to it?
Haha...
Yes you can if you so desire. Just not while I'm within a 10 mile radious (I am so tired give me a break.Yes I know how badly I spelled that.)
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